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I wrote this prompt to tell what tradegy happen in his life. His sister was older and they were close. My character is to show that he admires how brave she is and how she took care of situations that she doesn't want her brother to be in. Also, to show how much he misses her and how this affected him.

5th grade writing prompt Topic: who do you admire?

I admire no one really. I actually admire a ghost that was once living with me but now is gone. She use to read me bed time story's and always took care of me while my parents can't. While my mom was hitting my mom we hid under the bed and she hummed a tune. Just not that long ago she disappeared. It was a night when i was sleeping. I heard a tump and i walk in her room. I cried for days and wish it didn't happen. Sad to say it made my family better and i will always remember who is my favorite.

I wrote this diary entry to show how happy one thing can make someone/him feel when their problems go away. I also wrote this to show that when people drink alot they usually are running away from a problem and it builds up.

Diary 20, 9:30 p.m. I was invited to go to a party. I went last night and it was amazing. I decide i should become a guido. My parents said that i would end up like one but i said no i am going to be a nerd. Now i am going to party again next week. I was going to go tonight but i feel like the acholoh would get the best of me. I shouldn't be drinking at age 15 but i don't care i shouldn' be on this earth anyways.